Tami

I am at a loss - I don't know why, but I didn't like this much. I found it very sappy and I missed a real story here. It was a "I love you, man" all around and not much else. In retrospective I would have liked it better to have the three parts in one novel, would have also helped with keeping track of all the people in Marcus' hospital room. Also I found the "boy" over-used here.This part was simply an over-drawn HEA and it was boring to me. The only reason I finished it was, because it was really short. The writing overall was ok.